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Re: A Titleless Story (8)
I love this the characters are really believable. I really wanna know whats going to happen to Jared and Rosaline! I didn't find any mistakes, when I was reading it ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
H: *snorts delicately and removes the curse. For now.* Big deal. She’s a muggle. E: Muggle? OH! You mean Muggle-Wumps, from Roald Dahl’s The Twits right? My girl isn’t a ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Meep: Bella, you idiot. This is a G-rated story, no kissy faces are allowed here! *slaps Bella with a dead fish* Dead fish. Random! Ed: You can’t to that to ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
He carried the tray of burnt toast and orange juice over to Rosaline and placed it on the wooden bedside table. This made me giggle, he seems so proud of ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: A Titleless Story (1)
Ok, the nit-picking has pretty much been covered. I love this! I wanted to shout back. I wanted so desperately to throw my arms around his neck, press my limp ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Ian lay next to Kali, feeling nothing except his soul-crushing grief. I love this, it's short and sweet. Everyone else has pretty much pointed out any mistakes, so Ill just ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: A Superman, Edward Cullen & the Hulk spoof thing.
You should definitely get bored more often! That was really great. I was laughing to myself like a lunatic making people look at me wierdly. Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Scared of Being Nothing
It feels fragile; I'm afraid to hold too tight, [s]less[/s] lest it fall apart between my fingers. Apart from the few things Music pointed out I didn't find any other ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Two
Hiya, Ok review time! After killing Peter, I returned back to the grassy hill on which I surveyed the village only hours ago, mocking them of their ignorance. Mocking their ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: House 3
Hiya! Ok firstly, awesome story. I can't wait to read the rest, could you pm when you have the next bit written? Secondly, I found it really hard to find ...
Apr 3, 2009
